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Ravenpaw by Gravitii-CS Ravenpaw by Gravitii-CS
I didn't get to finish the fur shading because I have to leave now. Critiques please... Bye now! ~cold*-

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Apparently now I don't have to leave. THANKS A LOT MOM.

~cold*-
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I really, really like it!

Good things: The lines are nice and smooth, and the coloring and shading near the hair is good as well.

Negative things:
The eyes should be a different shade of red than the background, although I really love the idea!

Suggestions: I think you should make more details, like whiskers and extra tufts of fur on other places instead of on the outside of the face.

Other than that, it's great! You did a really amazing job on this drawing, and I look forward to the other stuff that you draw on here, and on Hatena! :D
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First off... this will be a honest critique. No asspatting will be here. Sorry!

Things I like:

I think the background matches this pretty well.

I like how you varied the thickness in the outline.

Things that are in the middle:
Some colors are blurred and some are not. The blurring that you did do looks fine... but it looks weird that the other colors are not.

The eyes give me conflicting thoughts. I liked how you switched it up a little bit, but the shapes of the eyes are just... weird looking. I hope I am not being rude.

Things that can use some work:

Overall anatomy is off. By a lot. The ears for instance are extremely misplaced. The neck it too short and the whole face it too low. Arm placement is incorrect. Pretty much whole head placement is incorrect.

The smile looks odd, because you made the outline thick and the teeth thinly outlined. I am not sure if this is just me... if so... my bad. ^^;

Try using thinner lines so your can get correct anatomy down, and then making the lines a little thicker as you get better.

It is hard to see if you put too much effort into this... because I can honestly say this is NOT your best work.

Vision:
This is going to be the second lowest rating, as explained in the things that need work, there are a lot of anatomy issues that bring this down a lot visual wise.

Originality:
What you are doing when you draw is somewhat repeating over and over again. Try switching it up a little.

Technique:
Anatomy wise, you need to work on it a LOT... and same with overall digital drawing skills.

I hope this was not too mean... I am just being completely honest. I am just trying to help. ^^

This is a good piece... it just needs work.

Nice job. Keep it up Cold!

-Rain
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Soaring-of-the-Sky Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Filmographer
What did you use for dis? 8D
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Gravitii-CS Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
da muro
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Soaring-of-the-Sky Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Filmographer
GASP. THATS A RADICAL DA MURO PIC, MAN. XD
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Gravitii-CS Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Lol, thanks? XD
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s0gay Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
She used dA muro. 'least it looks like it.
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Soaring-of-the-Sky Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student Filmographer
GASP. ITS LOOKES COOL.
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s0gay Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
o;
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